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Posted: 14 Oct 18 07:39

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The American Air Force has grounded its whole fleet of F35 fighter jets, described as the most sophisticated and expensive in the history of combat aviation. Media reports suggest that the Trump administration has found a legitimate excuse to get rid of the fleet as it has been an Obama-era obsession for nigh-on eight years. The $100million jet is being offered on Amazon for a knockdown price o.....

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Posted: 14 Oct 18 07:41
Hi Folks
Would love to get feedback on the NZ Air Force yarn about the F 35, as this is my first foray into Spoofage.


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Posted: 14 Oct 18 17:22 - Edited By: victor nicholas, 15 Oct 18 00:42
Good first effort. The overall idea is humourous, sentences are well written.

The general premise was supported by good detail but perhaps a bit more than required to advance the thrust of the story.

Keep writing to find your way.

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