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Forum Home / News Discussion / New Zealand Air Force buys half an F35 fighter jet
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Please discuss at will. PLEASE NOTE: The story you are discussing is a JOKE. It is a SPOOF NEWS story written on a SPOOF NEWS website. |
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Absolute Bull
Writer Registered: 13 Oct 18 Forum Profile Writer's Profile |
Hi Folks
Would love to get feedback on the NZ Air Force yarn about the F 35, as this is my first foray into Spoofage. Cheers Absolute Bull |
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victor nicholas
Doc  Location: Suwanee River Registered: 20 Apr 08 Forum Profile Writer's Profile |
Good first effort. The overall idea is humourous, sentences are well written.
The general premise was supported by good detail but perhaps a bit more than required to advance the thrust of the story. Keep writing to find your way. |
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